Talk:18×2 Beyond Youthful Days/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Prince of Erebor (talk · contribs) 16:25, 26 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Yovt (talk · contribs) 14:26, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this one on. Ping me if I'm not back by next week. - 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 14:26, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. I will now assess this article in accordance with the Manual of Style for film-related articles. - 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 15:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Lead

Lead section is a well-constructed summary of this film, so long as the Golden Horse Award nominations are updated as appropriate in the future.

Plot

Plot (also synopsis) section accurately describes the movie's content and is well between 400 - 700 words.

Cast

Cast section describes the roles of the actors in the film with refs, though I suggest adding a picture of the main character, particularly this one of Greg Hsu, alongside a proper caption like "Greg Hsu portrays Jimmy, a former video game developer who reconnects with his past love and life choices."

Production

Production section is a clear and readable narrative of how the film was developed.

Marketing

Marketing section seems good to me.

Release

Release section has in-line citations with verifiable refs.

Box Office

Box Office section has 100% verifiable info and 0% original research.

Critical reception

Critical reception (also Critical response) section has been summarized as "The film received generally positive reviews from critics", with later content further elaborating on that so good job.

Accolades

Accolades (in this case Awards and nominations) section shows what this film has secured in terms of nominations. Same case as lead, please be sure to update the Horse Award noms as soon as published.

Please take some time to make these changes (and others you think may be necessary). I will come back later for more feedback.

Nominator's reply

Hello Yovt! Thanks for reviewing this article (on this interestingly coincidental date XD)! Regarding the addition of images in the Cast section, that is a great suggestion. However, since both Greg Hsu and Kaya Kiyohara are the lead actors, it feels a bit odd to include just one of them. So I looked for available images and found a a Vogue Taiwan video featuring both Hsu and Kiyohara promoting the film in March, which has a CC license. I have added a screenshot to the article. Please take a look and let me know what you think. If you believe that having only the portrait of Greg Hsu is more preferable, I will change it accordingly. —Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 16:46, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

The screenshot you have provided is a better image for the cast section, thank you for including it. Overall: I feel this meets the criteria very easily, good work overall! Regards.

Pass/fail: 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

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