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Please move from lede (to, say, this talk page)

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"Two teams of court-appointed forensic psychiatrists examined Breivik before his trial. The first team diagnosed Breivik with paranoid schizophrenia, but after this initial finding was criticized, a second evaluation concluded that he was not psychotic during the attacks but did have narcissistic personality disorder and antisocial personality disorder."--Justification: the main trials are mentioned, and judges have convicted him (2011, 2012, and at least one more time).--No verdict has sentenced him to serve time in a mental health facility.--All the mental health stuff can be mentioned in the rest of the article, and in the sections dedicated to all his trials.--Please be bold, and move from lede (to, say, this thread or Talk page).--And then i will suggest how we can trim the lede even further. 2001:2020:331:B91D:3934:C29:BDF:3F9 (talk) 18:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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"and that he rented a farm as a cover for a fake farming company buying fertilizer (3 tons for producing explosives and 3 tons of a harmless kind to avoid suspicion) and as a lab".--Some stuff needs to go from lede - to Talk page. Other stuff, might just 'need to go'. 2001:2020:331:B91D:A516:1FE9:A99F:7156 (talk) 21:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Moved to Talk page

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Moved to Talk page: "He applied for parole in 2022, which the Court rejected [well, no, the correction authorities do the rejection, but the courts can look at the matter after that rejection], and [Breivik] subsequently appealed" ... .--Other than the above, non-optimal presentation, the article seems to be getting things right. 2001:2020:309:B058:78E0:9B13:8404:F359 (talk) 18:11, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Category:Farmer

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He registered a company, and said that its category would be "Farming".--He rented a property, a farm, so that no one would be alarmed by him buying tons of chemicals that are used to make bombs.--To my knowledge he has not farmed one square yard of land.--Perhaps one could stretch things, and say that he was the owner of a one-man farming company (that did not employ any farmers).--Please remove Category:Farmer.--Good luck! 2001:2020:31B:F0E4:F5AB:882D:9E1C:B78F (talk) 17:59, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed, it is a silly category, and not remotely a 'defining characteristic' per WP:CATDEF. I've removed it. AndyTheGrump (talk) 18:03, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]