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GA Reassessment

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Starts GA Reassessment. The reassessment will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 02:03, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 

Instructions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:06, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Observations

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  • HTML document size: 820 kB
  • Prose size (including all HTML code): 75 kB
  • References (including all HTML code): 110 kB
  • Wiki text: 135 kB
  • Prose size (text only): 37 kB (6304 words) "readable prose size"
  • References (text only): 14 kB
  • Page design and layout compares favourably with other pages in Category:Central American national association football teams
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  • Infobox ranking appears to be out. https://www.fifa.com/fifa-world-ranking/SLV gives a lowest ranking of 156
  • Reference 4 goes to a sports website. It does not go to the website of the governing body, Salvadoran Football Federation?
  • Reference 8 is a dead link.
  • Reference 9 is available on the Wayback Machine.
  • 1940's has a citation needed tag about Dr. Luis Rivas Palacios as president.
  • 1950's has no citations for any matches except the win against Mexico. Needs sources.
  • The paragraph on the 1970 World Cup and the Football War does not have sufficient citations. There are a lot of facts in that para with no citations, except reference to a book about War and Treaties?
  • jostling the Bermudan linesman, Keith Dunstan,has a [citation needed] tag.
  • 1980's - there are no citations for the World Cup qualification in the first paragraph.
  • Reference 31 is a dead link.
  • Reference 33 is incorrect, it is for a USSR - El Salvador match, not a match against Hungary.
  • goal score in match against Hungary has a citation needed tag: encourage them to score more.[citation needed]. Find it or remove the statement.
  • ditto could not afford to bring a full squad.[citation needed]
  • ditto The remaining uniforms were said to have been taken away by the association.[citation needed]
  • The paragraph about the World Cup campaign in Spain has 5 citation needed tags and insufficient references. It needs a lot of work.
  • In the 2000's, reporting of who scored goals in matches is not relevant. This article is about the team, not the individuals, it is not a personality top scorer list. This is out of style with the remainder of the article. Remove individual goal scorers.
  • drop with goals from Ramón Sánchez and Dennis Alas.
  • drop with goals from Lázár Szentes and Ferenc Csongrádi for Hungary and two goals from Luis Ramírez Zapata for El Salvador.
  • drop after a goal by Roger Espinoza
  • drop with two goals by Osael Romero.
  • References 60, 61 to FIFA are dead links.
  • drop with goals scored by Rodolfo Zelaya (2) and Christian Javier Bautista.
  • drop with goals from Bautista, Luis Anaya (2) and Xavier García
  • drop with goals by Víctor Turcios, Steve Purdy, Jaime Alas and Herbert Sosa.
  • drop The last of these was the thousandth goal scored by the national team this is not a relevant statistic.
  • this is poor expression: earned him the wrath of the public.[citation needed] Who earned the wrath of the public? Where is the citation?
  • All the material about the new coach Juan de Dios Castillo does not have citations.
  • The entire paragraph for 2020's has no citations. It is also written in a style reminiscent of puffery and MOS:PEACOCK. This section needs reliable sources and rewriting.
  • Reliable sources are needed for all the content in the first paragraph of match fixing.
  • Reference 78 does not address the topic. An archival link is needed.
  • The Borussia squad listing is irrelevant material for a page about the El Salvador national football team. Drop all of it.
  • Reference 80, 81 (on the Wayback Machine) are both dead links.
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  • There are 13 citation needed tags on this page.
  • The Early history section is good in its coverage. Online sources are excellent.
  • Updates to the page tend to focus on current squad and recent call ups, top ten appearances, game history, player statistics, like this.
  • Little attention is paid to history in page edits. One has to scroll back to 2013 to find detailed attention given to the history and activities of this team.
  • It is clear that the current national squad has been transformed into a much younger team over the past few years. There is no coverage of this.
  • There is no coverage of the recent strong results and wins in the current national campaigns. Surely 7-0, 4-0 wins deserve coverage???
  1. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  • Neutral point of view is presented in the article.
  1. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  • Page created 26 September 2004
  • Page has 6,574 by 1,659 editors
  • Links to this page = 2,084
  • External links = 123
  • 90 day page views = 61,883
  • Daily page views average 680
  • article is currently class (Listed September 28, 2011)
  • Examination of page history reveals a lot of IP address edits, mobile edits.
  • History is slanted towards the current team updates, recent call-ups, player statistics.
  • No edit warring is observed in page history except reversion of unexplained edits. Page is considered stable.
  1. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  • Page has 2 images
  • File:FESFUT logo.svg = SVG (non free logo ) used with specified application qualifies as fair use under the Copyright law of the United States.
  • File:Vista aerea Estadio Cusca.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license.
  • This page could use more images. The link to Commons reveals resources are available.
  1. Notifying Editors:
  • Page Creator Jaime070996 has not contributed significantly since 7 July 2019
  • Editor Dennisruizsv
  • Editor SpinnDoctor
  • Editor Intruder007
  • Editor BKReruns
  • Editor Danielmordor
  • A total of five involved editors were able to be notified.

  1. Overall:
  • Individual scorers are not necessary and belong in match reports, which are included in the schedule section commencing 2020
  • This page would benefit from having the Internet Archive bot run over it to repair all the dead links.
  • There is poor sourcing in recent history with 13 citation needed tags on the page, most notably in the 1980 section, which has been poorly sourced.
  • The 2020's section, Match fixing also lack proper sources.
  • Recent coaching and national selection has resulted a rather large transformation to a much younger team with different skillbase and talents. This is not covered in this article.
  • This article will not retain its Good Article status unless a lot of work is done on it. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:19, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 

 On hold for three weeks.

 

Result

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Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:06, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]