Talk:Forest of the Dead/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 17:46, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 20:16, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I will be reviewing this! This is the first GA article that I have reviewed.

I will give a proper in depth review but first I think these issues should be addressed:

In "Release", the dates should be in the style of "7 June 2008", not "7th" etc, and please can you link the TV shows that are mentioned?
- Done
In "Release", remove "easily" from "easily out-ranked the football" as it does not sound neutral.
- Reworded
I think that "Release" should be in "Production", or at the very least it should be "Release and reception" (not capitalised "reception").
- It's the general outline all Doctor Who episode articles follow
Is it possible to expand the "Production" section with more info/sources? That would really help the article.
- I'll try, but the references are from IA, and I think it's still down, so it'll take time
Images: Can the current image in the prose be reduced, as it is quite big, and can there be other free images there (e.g. Steve Pemberton)?
- Will add it
In reception, "Similarly, Patrick Mulkern of Radio Times found Professor River Song interesting, someone the Doctor is yet to meet but someone who knows a lot about him, including his name." – The bold is a bit confusing, can this be quoted or clarified ?
- Reworded

Once these are addressed/replied to I will give it a proper line by line review :) Please do not hesitate to ping me with any questions etc. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 20:16, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done/Responded to everything, DaniloDaysOfOurLives, also, thank you for taking up the review. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 03:50, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]