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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:54, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • Added GM cat.
  • Added WW2 cat.
  • "was an American football executive" should we change that to "was an American professional football executive"
  • Lowercase draft in the lead and body I guess.
  • "later renamed to the Tennessee Titans". Change to "now known as the Tennessee Titans" so as not to repeat "later" twice in one sentence.
  • "That year, the team compiled a record of 3–9" Change the team to "the Yanks". "the team" was getting a little repetitive.
  • "executive with the Houston Oilers (later Tennessee Oilers / Titans" Change to "now known as the Tennessee Titans".
  • "the person who announced the team's NFL Draft selections to league officials" That makes it sound like he was on TV or something. I don't think he was though? Suggest changing to "gave the team's NFL draft selections to league officials" That part in the lead might need revising also to make it less confusing.

I think that's everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:54, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.