Jump to content

Talk:Genius Loci (novel)

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Opening sentence.

[edit]

This is the current opening sentance.

Genius Loci is a novel by Ben Aaronovitch from The Adventures of Bernice Summerfield with the fictional archaeologist Bernice Summerfield as its main character. It depicts her early career.

I know I'm the author but couldn't this be changed to...


Genius Loci is a novel by Ben Aaronovitch. Part of The Adventures of Bernice Summerfield it focuses on the early career of the fictional archaeologost Bernice Summerfield.

Ben

Opening sentence.

[edit]

It's the '...from The Adventures of...' phrasing, it just seems so clumsy.