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GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC) This article has languished long enough. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Infobox and lead

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Fine here.

Life

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"...(Komisja Edukacji Narodowej)– the world's first ministry of education – he was.." Proper spacing in accordance with the hyphens.
In the first paragraph of the "Political career" section, you start a sentence with "In 1781...". In the second paragraph, you start a sentence with "On 29 May 1773...". Why the chronologic disparity?


"...office of the Writer of Lithuania..." Was he a scribe then? Either way, please elucidate.


"...a nickname bakałarz." Please write as "...a nickname: bakałarz." Also, what does this nickname mean?
You already wikilinked Familia in the first section.


"...with Russia attitude..." "...with the Russian attitude...", maybe?


"...of a Minister of War." No need for "a".
"...even after Poniatowski's access to it." Access isn't the correct word, maybe accession?
That is all.

Done all marked plus minor. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:15, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Remembrance

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This is as miniscule a section as any, but the content affords its own section nonetheless.

Conslucion

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Very fine article. Once everything has been addressed and allayed, I will pass this article. Excellent work and congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 01:03, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]