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I have tagged the article as "incomprehensible" because of the lead, which cites (or quotes, that isn't exactly clear, opus + one. It may well be so that this has been said about Moulène's work, but we are an encyclopedia. Our goal is not to intimidate our readers with impenetrable post-modernist jargon, but to elucidate. The lead fails in that respect. Please rewrite it in plain English. Vexations (talk) 16:40, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

To clarify: The phrase "Bound within conceptual parameters" seems to come from
https://miguelabreugallery.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/JLMoulene_SelectedPress_opt.pdf, where it makes more sense because those "parameters" (perhaps better described as "conditions for its operation" are enumerated:
  1. it must be separate and complete in itself
  2. make clear the conditions under which it was produced
  3. establish a direct link with that from which it has been separated
But without knowing this, that second sentence in the lead makes no sense. @Monak210: Vexations (talk) Vexations (talk) 17:44, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Vexations: Thanks for the feedback. Monak210 (talk) Monak210 (talk)

Moulène's practice examines the relationship between systems and orders.

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"Moulène's practice examines the relationship between systems and orders." Please explain what that means. Vexations (talk) 20:46, 18 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]