Talk:Kitab-ı Bahriye/GA1
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Nominator: Rjjiii (talk · contribs) 03:49, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: LEvalyn (talk · contribs) 23:45, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
I look forward to learning a great deal about this book! When I review, I typically make relatively small tweaks myself and just leave comments about bigger-picture items, though of course as always with editing you should feel to modify any changes I may make. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 23:45, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
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Prose
[edit]- I think the "History" section might be more accurately titled "Composition", since that is primarily what it explains. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 00:15, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Relatedly, the paragraph that begins with
The details in a portolan chart...
seems like it would fit better in the next section, since it explains the contents of the book. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 00:15, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Source review
[edit]I like to check a random 10 or 10% of the sources (whichever is more). For this article, I'll check sources 5, 9, 12, 18, 23, 26, 27, 30, 31, and 35, as they're numbered in this diff. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 00:15, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks much for taking on the review. Let me know if you need quotes or scans from any of the sources. Rjjiii (talk) 03:34, 5 October 2024 (UTC)