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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • "Caballero was a relative of professional wrestler Irma González as well as González's daughter Irma Aguilar although it is unclear exactly how they were related." - seems odd. In the infobox, it states that she is niece to Irma González. Please clarify this
  • "She started out as a masked wrestler," - began her career
  • "but lost her mask in 1958 to Irma González, but would later wrestle under the mask again." - repetition of the word "but"

Biography

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Professional wrestling career

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  • "including Magdalena Caballero. Caballero would work" Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
  • "Her reign lasted less than a year as Irma González won the championship later that year." - in 1955.
  • "she would at times wrestle under her real name and at other times still use the "La Dama Enmascarada" name," - and sometimes the
  • "After the mask loss" - the loss of her mask,
  • "despite not being masked anymore." - no longer being masked.
  • "Due to very few records of wrestling from that period of time" - from that time period
  • "it's uncertain who defeated La Dama" - it is uncertain as to who
  • "On January 22, 1961, La Dama Enmascarada evened the score with Irma González" - the text in bold is not particularly encyclopedic
  • "as she teamed up with Chabela Romero to take on the team of Irma González and Toña la Tapatía" - repetition of "team"
  • "Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL) show in Guadalajara." - the acroynms are not needed since they are not repeated elsewhere

Personal life

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  • "Caballero and husband Andrés Ramos had a total of six children together before their divorce in the 1950s" - the text in bold is not needed
  • "Magdalena Caballero died on March 11, 2006," - what did she die from? Do we know?

References

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  • It looks like that Reference 1 is missing the page number that the story can be found on

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 10:59, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]