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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 19:17, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 22:05, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]


  • "moved to its current status" to "moved to its current genus"
    • Changed.
  • Link palpal tibia.
    • I cannot find a page on the palpal tibia. Pedipalp and palpal bulb are linked when they are mentioned, however. Please tell me what you have in mind.
  • 'translated "strange".' to 'translated as "strange".'
    • Added.
  • "It was...in the field." The second clause here currently refers to "it", implying that the species made her a prolific author. Needs to be reworded.
    • Removed the subclause.
  • "the subclade Simonida in the clade Saltafresia in the clade Salticoida" I guess it's hard to avoid because there aren't any names for the ranks, but clade is repeated too much here.
    • Reworded.
  • "proposed a subfamily" to "proposed the subfamily"
    • Changed.
  • "This overlapped...in 2017" Is this group a clade or something?
    • Not explicitly so. Prószyński uses the term group of genera.
  • "have diverged between" to "have diverged from them between"
    • Changed.
  • "termed Lictor, after the"
    • Added.
  • "and relates to the" The verb here refers to "the species", not 'word that can be translated "strange"'. Needs to be reworded.
    • Reworded.
  • "particularly of the copulatory organs"
    • Removed.
  • "darker eye field that is covered with white hairs" Source says "colourless hairs".
    • Changed.
  • "brown chelicerae, which has" Goes from plural to singular.
    • Changed.
  • "south of Ibadan, in 1974" I think the comma is superfluous here.
    • Removed.
  • "Other examples" to "Other specimens"?
    • Changed.
  • "The spider thrives in forests" Source doesn't support this, cut.
    • Removed.
  • "near water, whether streams or rivers" I'd change this to just "near streams and rivers"
    • Changed.
  • References spotchecked:
  • Wesołowska, Wanda; Russell-Smith, Anthony (2011). "Jumping Spiders (Araneae: Salticidae) from Southern Nigeria". Annales Zoologici. 63 (3): 553–561.
  • Maddison, Wayne P. (2015). "A phylogenetic classification of jumping spiders (Araneae: Salticidae)". The Journal of Arachnology. 43 (3): 231–292.
  • Bodner, Melissa R.; Maddison, Wayne P. (2012). "The biogeography and age of salticid spider radiations (Araneae: Salticidae)". Molecular Phylogenetics and Evolution. 65 (1): 213-240.
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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