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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SaberToothCat. Peer reviewers: Oddball3029, FiveOfFive, Smgearnut.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:58, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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The article is really well done with lots of information. I think the tables are also really informative and the addition of a description portion of the tables is really intuitive. However, some of the films do not have a credit listing for her, what was her role on these films? And when it says "script" do you mean she wrote the script or edited it? Because now it looks like she was credited as the script. Also it says that she is a Canadian filmmaker, but she was born in South America, does she have Canadian citizenship only, or dual citizenship in Guyana as well? Lastly, well done finding all those references! Oddball3029 (talk) 13:51, 10 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This article I very well done I really like the structure, I would personally enjoy more elaboration on the the background but that's about all i have to comment on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smgearnut (talkcontribs) 17:44, 18 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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This article is extremely well researched! It also has an exemplary flow and organization, including the tables, the awards, and the in-depth biography. I would recommend adding more description on some on the films so there is a more balanced examination of each film. I would also include what her role was on each film as some of them seem to be absent. Overall, there was very little to be critiqued on this article and the varied sources of information make the piece reliable and coherent. Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by FiveOfFive (talkcontribs) 15:48, 10 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]