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Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 12, 2017.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the lyrics of Tove Lo's song "Not on Drugs" compared falling in love to being under the influence of drugs?
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:34, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • It was premiered on 24 February 2014 → The recording premiered on 24 February 2014
  • United States modern rock radio stations → American modern rock radio stations
  • the album's official second single → remove "official"
  • where it reached the number 19. → remove overfluous "the"
  • the same day the publication of → the same day the availability of

Infobox

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  • Unlink Tove Lo here

Background and release

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  • with the latter two credited → with the latter two being credited
  • the singer said; "He's a Swedish → the singer confessed, "He's a Swedish
  • at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm.[4] The Struts produced and programmed the track and played the → at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm, with The Struts producing and programming it alongside playing the
  • "Habits (Stay High)".[8][9][3][10] → refs in numerical order
  • to United States modern rock radio stations → to American modern rock radio stations
  • a release to US contemporary → a release to American contemporary
  • However, Republic announced → However, the label announced
  • would impact US CHR → would impact the aforementioned radio format
  • official second single → remove "official"
  • from US modern → from American modern

Inspiration and composition

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  • opening track in Tove Lo's → "in" to "on"
  • since most of her songs → state "her tracks" here for alternation
  • artist said; "'Not → ; to ,
  • included in "The Love" section on Lo's debut → "on" to "of"
  • and electropop song, with elements → no comma here
  • "exploding" chorus: "Baby, listen → : to ,
  • in the verse "I'm up → comma after "verse"
  • The line "I'm queen → comma after "line"

Reception

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  • Lewis Corner of Digital Spy included the track → state "the recording" here for alternation
  • and wrote that; "An exploding → ; to ,
  • Chad Hillard of Hillydilly wrote; "Boasting → ; to ,
  • two on his top 5 → two on his top five
  • Queen of the Clouds that; "Out of all the songs → ; to ,

Music video

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  • artist said; "I choked → ; to ,
  • review, writing; "[...] It's → ; to ,

Live performances

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  • she performed the song on US music → she performed the song on American
  • in London, UK → no need to mention "UK" here as it's a common term

Credits and personnel

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  • flawless ;)

Release history

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  • Unlink "Modern rock" here

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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Images

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  • Image from "Inspiration and composition" should be remove as it is overfluous and brings nothing to the article. Additionally, the singer is already presented on the single's cover artwork.
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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
  • No dead links! Good job!!

Outcome

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All comments  addressed!. Thank you so much for the review! Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 00:50, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:28, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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