Talk:Principe di Carignano-class ironclad
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Principe di Carignano-class ironclad has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 27, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:03, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Grabbing for a review. Miyagawa (talk) 10:03, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, let's go. As always, I suspect there won't be much! :)
- Lead: Link Frigate at the first appearance (or Steam frigate if you want to mirror the article body)
- Done
- Design: The Sardinian Navy/Regia Marina Sarda (Royal Sardinian Navy) thing from the last review again.
- Done
- Can you fully spell out "Inps. Eng." the first time? I presume Eng is Engineer, but I have no idea what Inps. is. Guessing at Inspector but that doesn't seem right.
- That's part of the problem - Conway's only says "Insp. Eng." - I'd assume Inspector as well, but I don't know for sure.
- General charisteristics: Link Displacement (fluid) at the first "displaced" and Mast (sailing) at the end of the subsection
- Added both
- Armament and armor: Mention Conte Verde's belt armor, since you already have it in the lead.
- See if what I added works.
- That's the lot. Ping me back when you've had a chance to look at those. Placing on hold. Miyagawa (talk) 11:28, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Miyagawa: - thanks for reviewing another article! Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Great. Happy to promote to GA on that basis. Miyagawa (talk) 18:31, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Miyagawa: - thanks for reviewing another article! Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
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