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Good articleSMS Custoza has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSMS Custoza is part of the Ironclads of Austria-Hungary series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 10, 2016Good article nomineeListed
December 22, 2018Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 10, 2016.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that SMS Custoza was the first Austro-Hungarian major warship to have an iron hull?
Current status: Good article

Line-drawing

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Available here (along with others). Parsecboy (talk) 18:19, 10 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Save this for later - useful technical tidbits. Parsecboy (talk) 20:47, 10 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Need to translate this (seems to be written by Romako), much technical detail. This might also be useful. This looks to have some service details. As does this one (which has an illustration on page 165). Parsecboy (talk) 18:13, 30 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Custoza/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:08, 10 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Section 1

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  • Para 1; sentence 2; In the sentence which of the two vessels was built smaller, Custoza or Erzherzog Albrecht or both? Please clarify.
    • Should be clear now.
  • Para 2; last sentence; Remove the dup-link of Erzherzog Albrecht as it was linked in first para of the same section.
    • Done.

Section 1.1

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  • Para 1; sentence 3; It is mentioned that the displacement varied from 7,609 t (...) to 7,730.99 t (...), but in the infobox it was precisely mentioned as 7,609 metric tons, why is this contradiction? Could it be clarified in the prose and corrected accordingly in the infobox.
  • Para 1; last sentence; Same as the above concern, contradiction between prose (548 to 567) and infobox (548) about the crew.
    • I simply forgot to add those figures to the infobox - both fixed.

Section 2

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  • Para 3; Remove the dup-links of Tegetthoff and Adriatic as they were already linked in the 2nd para of the 1st section.
    • Fixed
  • Para 4; sentence 1; What is "II Reserve"?
    • It's a unit name - there's no article to link to, unfortunately.

Section 4 (references)

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  • Please consider using ISBN-13 for the third reference to maintain consistency. It is 9780851771335, you could verify and put in the place.
    • Done

Lead

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  • Sentence 1; Why is the ship "the only member of her class"? Erzherzog Albrecht is too of the same class. I forgot to check this in the prior review of Erzherzog Albrecht, it's lead also contains the same.
    • They aren't the same ship class - their designs are similar in conception, but they differ significantly in just about every way.
  • The fate "field" of infobox shows "Ceded to Italy, 1920, fate unknown", but it was clearly mentioned in the lead and the prose that the vessel was brokenup for scrap by Italy.
    • Good catch, I forgot to update that after adding the line from Greger.

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:08, 10 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 12:25, 10 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:42, 10 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ref

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Here, may have some details worth adding. Parsecboy (talk) 20:17, 24 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]