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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this article today! --K. Peake 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • WP:OVERLINK of Dimitri Vegas & Like Mike under both songwriters and producers
  • The release sentence should be the third of the first para instead
  • "by Dimitri Vegas and Like Mike and wrote it with" → "by the duo, who served as songwriters alongside"
  • Remove the refrain part and release year of "Africa", as this is not notable info for the lead
  • "it is a dance, electro-pop" → "it is a dance-pop, electro-pop" since elsewise, it is not clear to readers that you mean the genre dance-pop
  • "atop the Billboard's" → "atop the US Billboard"
  • "number 29 in Belgium" → "while peaking at number 29 in Belgium." removing the Austria position because this is too low to be notable here
  • Add a brief mention of what the video features Istrefi doing
  • "Prior to the single's release," → "Prior to its release,"
  • "performed at the Tomorrowland's" → "performed at Tomorrowland's"

Background and composition

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  • "and wrote it with" → "and served as songwriters alongside"
  • Why is [3] invoked in the single release sentence as well as the remixes one?
  • "by the latter labels on" → "by the aforementioned labels on" because these two are the only labels mentioned
  • ""Selfish" is a tropical-described dance," → "Musically, "Selfish" is a tropical-described dance-pop,"
  • "Regarding the artist's collaboration," → "Regarding the collaboration with Istrefi," with the wikilink, also this should be the sentence directly after production/songwriting since it gives background on her appearance
  • ""BonBon" (2015) and knew" → "'BonBon' (2015) and knew"
  • "as well as Istrefi's vocal delivery." → "and Istrefi's vocal delivery."
  • ""[Selfish] is a radio friendly hit" also" → ""[Selfish is a] radio friendly hit", also"
  • "and similarly noted the song's potential" → "and similarly noted its potential"
  • "CelebMix' Jonathan Currinn commended" → "CelebMix's Jonathan Currinn commended"
  • Wikilink Miami Music Week
  • "peaked atop the Billboard's" → "peaked atop the US Billboard"
  • "in Belgium, and number 690" → "in Belgium and number 690"

Promotion and music video

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  • "music video, depicting Istrefi lying on a setting" → "music video, depicting Istrefi lying in a setting" on the img text with the wikilink
  • "premiered "Selfish" at the Tomorrowland's" → "premiered "Selfish" at Tomorrowland's"
  • "An accompanying music video for "Selfish"" → "A music video for "Selfish""
  • "notably features a series of scenes of Istrefi performing on" → "prominently features scenes of Istrefi performing in"

Track listing

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Release history

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See also

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  • Billboard should be italicised for the chart

References

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  • Copyvio score looks superb at 20% bang on!!!
  • Add the language parameter to the second citation of ref 3 and alter the title appropriately
  • I don't see evidence of any editorial process or usage by reliable sources for refs 5 and 8; what exactly makes them usable?
Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:44, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 18 is titled incorrectly as the music video; it appears you copied the title from the other ref by accident

Final comments and verdict

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Hello Kyle Peake once again, I've responded to all of your comments. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:45, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]