Talk:Speak Now World Tour/GA1

GA Review

Passed. brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 08:50, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 10:16, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 01:45, 26 July 2024 (UTC) Drop everything now. Because everybody's favourite GA reviewer is here!^{[citation needed]} Will this review be the best thing that's ever been mine? Will the story of this review end soon? It all depends on the nominator, lol. But one thing's for sure, I won't be drunk and grumbling about the quality of article? But anyways, good luck, cos I see sparks fly whenever I see this article.[reply]

@Ippantekina i got my points presented for you… =D brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 08:23, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I'll get to them shortly. Ippantekina (talk) 08:36, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvois

Violation unlikely (35.8%). But I managed to see some copyvios though, so here they are:

Paraphrase keen understanding of what fuels fan obsession in the first place: a desire for intimacy between singer and listener

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:04, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

Taylor Swift (6820735620).jpg is clear, but TayTay is in a bad angle.

I think that's the best image to show the arm lyric; other photos have greater angles but no clear showings of the arm lyric.. Ippantekina (talk) 08:13, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

Lead

FN 1: Formatting is a bit werid. Also why is there an information for the value of the box office value in "2023 dollars"?

It is automatically generated by {{Inflation}} to give readers perspective on how historical values of the USD compare with the most recent rates. Ippantekina (talk) 08:48, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development

~~FN 10: No mention of Singapore.~~

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 12: Not archived.
~~FN 13, 15-16, 18-20: Are they reliable?~~

I don't see why not; they are all reputable sources (CMT, MusicRow are country music-focused publications, others are magazines/newspapers with editorial oversight). Ippantekina (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ill let them pass brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 04:05, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 14 is unreliable.

In this context PR Newswire can be sufficient as a reference for WP:ABOUTSELF I believe. Ippantekina (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

a bit… confused by that statement

Meaning it's a self-promotion. Per WP:ABOUTSELF: "Self-published and questionable sources may be used as sources of information about themselves" (also applicable to Facebook/Twitter etc. that are usually considered unreliable) Ippantekina (talk) 08:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concert synopsis

FN 21 may not be reliable.

Why? I think it's fine. Ippantekina (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

alr… ill let it pass brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 04:05, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What does FN 19, 27-28 say?
What does FN 32 say?

For ProQuest citations, you can view them via the Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Library (Free access with your Wikipedia account). Ippantekina (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 36: Unarchived, speaks NOT about the B-stage

It does though? (I’m singing a different cover song every night on the B stage [at the other end of the arena], just me and my guitar.) Ippantekina (talk) 04:38, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

alr thanks for the clarification brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 04:06, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 35: It says Video screens contrasted photos of Swift’s musicians at age 15 and now. No mention of Swift.

Fixed. Ippantekina (talk) 08:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alterations

FN 42: Mentions Fifteen being in the main set in place of Last Kiss, something not in the section.

Tweaked. Ippantekina (talk) 04:00, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 47: Does not mention Safe and Sound being part of the setlist.

I think it does now. Ippantekina (talk) 04:00, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FN 52: No mention of tributes.

It's a paraphrase of Taylor Swift has been honoring the music of many cities on her North American tour for Speak Now by playing covers of hits by local stars. Ippantekina (talk) 04:00, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

got it brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 00:02, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've addressed all of your points :) Ippantekina (talk) 08:50, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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