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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tristimania/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:38, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No copyvio concerns; no dablinks, duplinks or broken external links.

Noted.

Coming to the prose,

  • Inline citations missing for the last line of 'Context' and the last lines in the 1st and the 5th paras of 'Book'
Added.
  • Genetic vulnerability What exactly does it mean? And vulnerability to what?
Glossed.
  • 'She' is a bit repetitive in some places in 'Book', a few of these instances could be replaced with 'Griffiths'.
Done.
  • describing the Old English wōd A link for Old English? Should 'wōd' be in italics?
Done both.
  • Mercutio (here played by Orson Welles) Maybe add which play it is referring to, directed by whom, the year?
Done.
  • A link for 'antipsychotics'?
Done.
  • seeing people's wings Maybe 'wings' should be in quotes since this was her imagination and not for real?
Added.
  • As she is wished "Buen Camino" Maybe add a translation here?
Added.
  • 'Shakespeare' should be linked at the first mention
Done.
  • Tristimania is not in italics consistently throughout the article
Fixed.
  • Does the article consistently use British English?
I think so, at least it all feels natural to this native. Added tag.
  • Access date missing for refs, 25, 26, 28
Added.
  • Ref. 26 has the 'G' in 'Griffiths' in lower case
Fixed.

That is all. A nice read :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:03, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much!
Good job. Happy to promote :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:59, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]