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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 15:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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1.

  • Is the queen in "Queen regnant" capitalized? I've seen both ways and I'm not sure which one is technically correct
  • Changed.
  • "resistance government in the Raiatean rebellion (1887–1897) " - I may be wrong but my gut instinct suggests during instead of in
  • Changed.
  • Wikilink Opoa if that's the correct place
  • Changed.
  • "After Tehauroa's death, a civil war nearly broke out between two rivals for the throne." - Do we know a year on this?
  • Changed.
  • "In 1887 or 1888" - I think it might read better as "In either 1887 or 1888", but if you don't like that, ignore it.
  • Changed.
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  • "1878 Kanak in New Caledonia" - Kanak is linked to a people group, but the context makes it sound like a rebellion. I think the same thing came up in the Teraupo'o review
  • Changed.
  • "Teraupo’o" - Wrong '
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  • "two French warships, the Duguay Trouin and L'Aube arrived" - Comma between L'Aube and arrived
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  • "the rebel chief's captured after two months of" - I think it should be capture not captured
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  • "The casualty of the six-week campaign was nearly fifty deaths mainly on the side of the Raiateans" - I think it should be casualties and were instead of casualty and was
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  • Wikilink francs
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  • Can we get a translation for the French quote towards the end?
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  • I see no issue with the family tree and WP:NOTGENEALOGY, since it's a royal family and is important to the background of the story

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  • Ref 14 needs the year and the page number, if available.
  • The date is not available. I've try looking for it to no avail. It’s an online encyclopedia without any dates for its entries.
  • Makes sense, all fine in that area then.

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Placing on hold. One ref formatting issue and a handful of minor prose issues. Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 17:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: See changes. KAVEBEAR (talk) 21:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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