Talk:Vultures 2/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 15:54, 28 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Dxneo (talk · contribs) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Hello, I'm tackling this review. I just went through the whole article and this is really such a good piece which I'd actually pass right away. However, I have a few minor suggestions. Oh, please consider reviewing "Truth or Dare". dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Dxneo Thanks a lot for this review, I would be willing to take on your article sometime this week as I don't have a lot on my plate! --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Thank you so much. dxneo (talk) 21:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• I think it's better to describe what the album is about before name dropping the producers and collaborators. What do you think? dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

•  Not done it is common in music articles for the people who worked on the album/song to be mentioned before what the subject discusses in itself --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Music and themes

• It features a raw style, including prominent synths. Multiple publications noted the album's unfinished sound, comparing its songs to demotapes. — keep WP:REFBOMB to a minimum. dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

•  Done --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

post-release updates

• For the first update on August 6, 2024, "River" received a new mix and drums, with sound effects removed too. "530" was provided with altered sound effects and some distorted vocals, adding Ty Dolla Sign. "Fried" had a new mix and seemingly unmastered ad-libs, while "Field Trip", "Sky City", and Dead" — this is cited to references and there are periods in between the sentences, so I thought maybe you could put a reference after each sentence. Thoughts? dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

•  Comment: since the ref group at the end back up this information throughout, I think re-invoking would class as WP:OVERCITE. --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

  What about WP:REFBOMB? dxneo (talk) 21:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

See also

• I don't think this section is necessary. Vultures 1 can be seen multiple times in the infobox (opening). And one thing I'm missing here is the release history. dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

•  Done you made a fair point here, silly of me to have added this! Also, I think release history is too hard to source being that I had to add multiple citations to back up the full context of the album's release anyway and it's only been released in download/streaming too. --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Media

• All is well here. dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Personnel

• Am I missing something or there are no credits here? dxneo (talk) 00:39, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

•  Comment: West has not disclosed the full credits for this release much like Vultures 1, only offering the writers and producers. --K. Peake 19:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

  Wow, I also can't find anything on Apple Music 😳 However, as we all know, information in the infobox must be fairly referenced in the body of the article. So how do we move about this? dxneo (talk) 21:07, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

  Maybe put a source at the end of the list (infobox)? Thoughts? dxneo (talk) 21:09, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

  Wait, I can actually see songwriters here, and it says the information was abducted from Tidal. I think this checks out Y dxneo (talk) 21:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Copyright vio

• Violation unlikely as Earwig finds 16% similarity. dxneo (talk) 00:35, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

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