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I've just copyedited this article, fulfilling a request someone made on WP:GOCE/REQ. I hope I've helped and not messed anything up too much.

I was confused by one thing, the end of the last sentence of the "Life" section: "...Anonymous only inserted Zoltán into the incompletely preserved list of the grand princes because all Hungarian monarchs from the House of Árpád descended from him."

Maybe I'm just having a slow day, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say there. The rest of the article looks good to me! Bobnorwal (talk) 19:08, 4 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Bobnorwal, thank for your copyedit. I inserted some words in the above sentence. I hope these words help to understand it. Have a nice day! Borsoka (talk) 01:49, 5 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]