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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:51, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Lion Forge Comics

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Created by Savant-Man (talk) and Argento Surfer (talk). Nominated by Argento Surfer (talk) at 15:28, 16 February 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nice article, nice subject. Some sentences in the article were not quite encyclopedic in tone, e.g. with beautiful and eerie art and thought-provoking titles. I have rephrased the advertising language in encyclopedic language and am passing the hook. If you want to tweak my edits, feel free to do so, but keep in mind the principle of neutral, encyclopedic language. You might want to use provide instead of give in the hook—just a suggestion. Second suggestion would be to add a picture. But no obstacles to passing the hook as far as I am concerned. Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 23:57, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the copyediting and the suggestion on the hook phrasing - I have changed it accordingly. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:54, 7 March 2018 (UTC)
Great! Let's hope the hook comes out quickly, considering the current Black Panther mania.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 16:02, 7 March 2018 (UTC)