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Mokulubete Makatisi
- ... that Mokulubete Makatisi placed eighth at the Commonwealth Games in the marathon while running in shoes she had never worn before?
- Source: Public Eye News ("Makatisi, 26, finished the race on position eight in the women’s commonwealth marathon last Saturday ... Makatisi’s mentor ... says his athlete has tried very hard despite the setback of having to run in new shoes which she began to use for the first time on the day of the race.")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/William Aitken (architect) (2/4)
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 237 past nominations.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:27, 17 August 2024 (UTC).
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 15:45, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing: - "She competed in the Maputo All-Africa Games in 2011" doesn't seem to be supported by ref 1, so use ref 2 for that (go to statistics -> results -> 2011). Page says 1:09:45 but ref 6 says 1:09:44. No other issues though.
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting: - Should clarify something like how late these shoes were and/or how much they're needed for running, but no other issues.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Nom one week after creation and size 2330 B. Ref 4 ad 6 is broken, so I used [1] and [2]. @BeanieFan11: fix these issues and I'll approve. You may wanna update the article, but consider this optional. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:23, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Oops, forgot I hadn't yet addressed these. I just made the changes and added a few updates. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:10, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- Wait, still have to clarify the hook... wait a minute. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:12, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hmm... what do you think would be a good way to clarify in the hook? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:15, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- Wait, still have to clarify the hook... wait a minute. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:12, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Either of my suggestions in the "Interesting" section are fine, but I cannot approve a hook if I submit it myself, so do use your judgment in determining what's the more interesting one. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:57, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11 and Miraclepine: Ping me if you need any hooks assessed.--Launchballer 10:11, 20 September 2024 (UTC)