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User:Esaiter/Competence (law)/Ree73 Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Esaiter

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esaiter/Competence_%28law%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Competence (law)

Evaluate the drafted changes

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  • The section you have added contains content that is relevant and informative.
  • The content you have added has a neutral tone and does not attempt to sway the reader in any particular direction.
  • Most statements appear to by backed up by credible sources; however, there are a few statements, like the second sentence, where I would consider adding a citation.
  • It looks like sources 7 and 9 and sources 1 and 8 are the same in your sandbox draft (these are 12 and 14 and 13 and 6 in the actual article). Could you combine these?
  • The content you have added is well-written, well-organized, and the examples you have provided are very helpful.
  • The article is more complete thanks to this section! Great work.