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Bibliography

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Edit this section to compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.

  • Gholamzad, M., Ebtekar, M., Ardestani, M.S. et al. A comprehensive review on the treatment approaches of multiple sclerosis: currently and in the future. Inflamm. Res. 68, 25–38 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1007/s00011-018-1185-0
    • Recent comprehensive review of treatment of MS
  • McGinley, M. P., Goldschmidt, C. H., & Rae-Grant, A. D. (2021). Diagnosis and Treatment of Multiple Sclerosis: A Review. JAMA, 325(8), 765–779. https://doi.org/10.1001/jama.2020.26858
    • Great review of diagnosis & treatment of MS published in 2021 so should help with outdated citations
  • Ward, M., & Goldman, M. D. (2022). Epidemiology and Pathophysiology of Multiple Sclerosis. Continuum (Minneapolis, Minn.), 28(4), 988–1005. https://doi.org/10.1212/CON.0000000000001136
    • Great review of pathogenesis/public health aspects of MS published in 2022
  • Loma, I., & Heyman, R. (2011). Multiple sclerosis: pathogenesis and treatment. Current neuropharmacology, 9(3), 409–416. https://doi.org/10.2174/157015911796557911
  • Ghasemi, N., Razavi, S., & Nikzad, E. (2017). Multiple Sclerosis: Pathogenesis, Symptoms, Diagnoses and Cell-Based Therapy. Cell journal, 19(1), 1–10. https://doi.org/10.22074/cellj.2016.4867
  • Thompson, Alan J; Banwell, Brenda L; Barkhof, Frederik; Carroll, William M; Coetzee, Timothy; Comi, Giancarlo; Correale, Jorge; Fazekas, Franz; Filippi, Massimo; Freedman, Mark S; Fujihara, Kazuo; Galetta, Steven L; Hartung, Hans Peter; Kappos, Ludwig; Lublin, Fred D (2018-02). "Diagnosis of multiple sclerosis: 2017 revisions of the McDonald criteria". The Lancet Neurology. 17 (2): 162–173. doi:10.1016/s1474-4422(17)30470-2
  • Okuda, D. T., Mowry, E. M., Beheshtian, A., Waubant, E., Baranzini, S. E., Goodin, D. S., Hauser, S. L., & Pelletier, D. (2009). Incidental MRI anomalies suggestive of multiple sclerosis: the radiologically isolated syndrome. Neurology, 72(9), 800–805. https://doi.org/10.1212/01.wnl.0000335764.14513.1a
  • Lebrun-Frenay, Christine; Kantarci, Orhun; Siva, Aksel; Azevedo, Christina J; Makhani, Naila; Pelletier, Daniel; Okuda, Darin T (2023-11). "Radiologically isolated syndrome". The Lancet Neurology. 22 (11): 1075–1086. doi:10.1016/s1474-4422(23)00281-8
  • Zainal Abidin, N., Tuan Jaffar, T. N., & Ahmad Tajudin, L. S. (2023). Wall-Eyed Bilateral Internuclear Ophthalmoplegia as an Early Presentation of Multiple Sclerosis. Cureus, 15(3), e36835. https://doi.org/10.7759/cureus.36835

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Workplan

  • Throughout article, update citations with more up-to-date references
  • Intro paragraphs: Finish by 12/3
    • change degenerative to autoimmune disease (change link as well) in first sentence for more specificity
    • Add in brief description of progressive MS in first paragraph since it describes relapsing-remitting MS
    • In second paragraph, edit sentence on proposed causes to refer to later section
    • In third paragraph, edit sentence on treatment to reflect acute flare management, disease-modifying therapy for long-term relapse prevention, and patient-centered symptom management.
    • In third paragraph, remove sentence on alternative treatments altogether since they have not been proven to be efficacious: can touch on them later in treatment section
  • Signs & Symptoms section: Finish by 12/3
    • Clarify first paragraph's description of classic MS presenting symptoms
    • Clarify psychiatric symptoms of MS
    • Remove sentence on CIS: unsupported claim
    • Start third paragraph with percentages o most common symptoms using updated citation
    • Edit section on disease course to refer to MS types later in article
  • Causes section: Finish by 12/3
    • Intro paragraph/sentence: clarify that leading hypothesis is autoimmune dysregulation
    • Add in section detailing autoimmunity of MS
    • Infectious agents subsection: remove first sentence as it is not helpful, rest of this subsection looks good
    • Genetics subsection: edit first paragraph's last section to reflect what ethnic groups are disproportionally impacted, edit second paragraph to clarify that only the HLA-DR15 allele is associated with higher risk of MS development
    • Geography: include role of vitamin D & latitude in explanation of increasing MS risk as you move away from the equator
    • Other: include the following risk factors: obesity, diet & gut microbiome, comorbidities
  • Pathophysiology section: Finish by 12/10
    • Remove sentence on cholesterol crystals: while may be true & supported by research, is not particularly relevant to the pathophysiology of MS as we currently understand it
    • Add "immune dysregulation" subsection to explain current thoughts of the development of autoimmunity that leads to MS
  • Diagnosis section: Finish by 12/10
    • Overall accurate & concise, will add in paragraph clarifying what the McDonald Criteria are, what DIS & DIT are and what can be done to prove them
    • Remove sentence on brain atrophy: this finding is non-specific to MS
    • Add paragraph on studies that can support diagnosis of MS
    • Differential Diagnosis section is overall accurate & concise
  • Types & Variants: Finish by 12/10
    • Overall accurate & concise, will add paragraph detailing radiologically isolated syndrome (RIS)
  • Management: Finish by 12/15
    • Acute flare management: overall accurate, clarify that IVIG & plasmapheresis can be use concurrently with steroids
    • Clarify indications & side effects of most commonly used disease-modifying drugs