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Your submission at Articles for creation: Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster (July 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 08:43, 14 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Brian.mcdonald01! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 08:43, 14 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Camp Coordination Camp Management Cluster concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Camp Coordination Camp Management Cluster, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:40, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:38, 19 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Camp Coordination Camp Management Cluster

Hello, Brian.mcdonald01. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Camp Coordination Camp Management Cluster".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 18:24, 2 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster

Hello, Brian.mcdonald01. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 14:07, 16 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster (August 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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Fiddle Faddle 10:54, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

There is no copyrighted material in this article. previously it references some material that was under an incompatible licence, but this has was changed.

Your COI with CCCM Cluster

Please will you specify whether you are, broadly construed, paid by CCCM cluster, or whether you are unrelated but with a general COI? If you arem for example, a staff member, then this counts as paid editing. I am posting a formal notice below this comment to allow you to clarify further. Fiddle Faddle 11:07, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Brian.mcdonald01. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat SEO.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Brian.mcdonald01. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Brian.mcdonald01|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Fiddle Faddle 11:07, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am not a staff member of the Camp Coordination and Camp Management cluster as it is not a business or legal entity of any sort. It is mechanism in which humanitarian response in coordinated. Please see the current wiki page for https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shelter_Cluster as another example. I currently work for the International Organisation for Migration, part of the United Nations. I do not receive compensation for my edits.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster (August 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Theroadislong (talk) 12:58, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Camp Coordination and Camp Management Cluster. Thanks! Fiddle Faddle 13:17, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]