User talk:Disruptive Ltd.(GEAR4)
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[edit]I'm seeing a few problems. One, the use of inline external liks is frowned upon. Two, there's a bit of overlinking. Three, it hasn't established notability, for which you need independed sources. Four, the tone is too informal; it shouldn't use "you", for a start, & it sounds promotional. Five, it has the smell of an advert, which raises potential conflict of interest issues. TREKphiler any time you're ready, Uhura 21:25, 23 July 2011 (UTC)