User talk:Ms1904/Nomura's jellyfish
Feedback on your Wikipedia Draft
[edit]Overall, this draft looks really good. I like how your bolded text demonstrated that you added a more reliable source if needed. Nothing unusual stuck out to me reading this, everything had a nice flow to it, and was all relevant to the topic. I was wondering though if it would be more convenient to cite your information after each sentence? I find that it can be difficult to keep track of citations, if one does not appear for another three sentences. This way, it would be easier for the reader to know exactly which source was responsible for the material in that one sentence specifically. Lhi1001 (talk) 19:15, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Another thing I forgot to mention is that you need to make sure that all the articles that you are using for this draft are included in your bibliography. Otherwise, nice job!Lhi1001 (talk) 19:17, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I really enjoyed reading this article, and it was easy to see what you edited because of your bolded text. I would just suggest adding more citations to the end of your sentences so the reader knows exactly where the information is coming from. Overall, I think it is a strong draft and was easy to follow. Lsm1041 (talk) 18:45, 11 March 2024 (UTC)