User talk:Oddball3055/sandbox
Assessment of Article Draft
[edit]Revisions necessary.
It's great that you've found some material that's not covered in Caro's existing page. However, you should add some information about Caro beyond a description of this single film. Also, fix the formatting of the references and take away the name of the database. You might want to make separate headings for each of Caro's films. - Chronophoto (talk) 02:31, 10 February 2016 (UTC)