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Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Surendra P. Shah (September 13)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
DoubleGrazing (talk) 18:56, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, Rohitashvasingh! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 18:56, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Thanks for creating a draft!

Hello Rohitashvasingh, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Dr. Surendra P. Shah to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:

I highly recommend visiting The Teahouse if you are unsure about anything Wiki related. It's a place where experienced editors answer questions and assist newcomers in the editing process. In addition, please do not hesitate to reach out on my talk page if you have any specific questions. Once again, welcome! I hope you enjoy your time here. ~Liancetalk 00:14, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Surendra P. Shah (September 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dr vulpes was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Dr vulpes (Talk) 02:09, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much for letting me know. I will revise the draft based on your feedback. Although Dr. Shah is not my dissertation committee chair; he has advised me in my research. I firmly believe that a person so well-known in the field of concrete science should have a Wikipedia page. I hope to prepare a draft that meets your standards for acceptance. 64.189.5.17 (talk) 02:28, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please note, I accepted the draft. It still has a few things where sources would help, I have mentioned a couple on the article talk page. Depending upon the level of his advice you should add a mention of this to your user page. Ldm1954 (talk) 12:49, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for your help and guidance. I will look at the article talk page and add sources. I noticed that the picture near the introduction is not showing up, and just mentions the file name instead of the image. Is it an error from my side or is it pending some approval before being published on the site? Could you please guide me on this? Thanks! Rohitashvasingh (talk) 14:15, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
My apologies, the issue with image is resolved. I uploaded the file and inserted it to the page. I will continue to add more sources. Thank you! Rohitashvasingh (talk) 14:43, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK. Some suggestions:
  1. Use the scientist infobox scientist (as {{Infobox scientist}}) rather than an image
  2. Much of the first paragraph is either his education or his career -- move to those and don't repeat.
  3. Make the first paragraph just a brief introduction, it does not have to be more than 2-3 sentences. It is what we call the "lede".
  4. Please look at MOS:BLP, and also a few other scientists.
Ldm1954 (talk) 17:21, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]