User talk:Tia Rae13
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[edit]Ball Park Franks
Good, reliable sources! Work more on citing sources within the article Subtitles would benifit the article and organization Great picture!!!! benifit from more pictures about variety of dogs
Tips!
Hyperlink (varieties of dogs, Briggs Stadium and other businesses and important names, cities)
Use Cite number even when saying that it is cited.
Grammar (Capitalize Frank every time, repeated "the" first paragraph in variety section, "option" second paragraph, "nitrates" second paragraph variety section)
No comma before the word "and" (second paragraph Variety section)
Add different subheads within the varieties of dogs
Re phrase four types of hamburger patties so it flows more
Fix syntax making it less "wordy" — Preceding unsigned comment added by StefanieGamboa (talk • contribs) 17:56, 17 May 2018 (UTC)