User talk:Yan.yiw/sandbox

Review

Yan.yiw, good start, I made a bunch of edits, especially at the top, to demonstrate my suggestions below for for moving forward.

• The references you have at the bottom should be associated with specific claims in your prose, throughout the article.
• Can you find more reputable sources? Perhaps AmandaRR123 or LibrarianBTeam could help.
• I've fixed many of the typos but some remain.

-Reagle (talk) 22:04, 28 March 2019 (UTC)