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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like for the article to be a professional wrestling Good Article. Any helpful feedback, would most be appreciated.

Thanks, Zenlax T C S 19:41, 28 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

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Hello Zenlax, some comments which you may find useful.

  • Is it Backlash (2004) or Backlash 2004? Infobox has latter, title and lead has former. Or Backlash, as in the main article?
  • First three paras of Event could be merged.
  • "enziguiri kick" what's that?
  • You use [29][30] for five consecutive sentences. It'd be better to just use it once at the end of the fifth sentence. There are several examples of this.
done Zenlax T C S 20:00, 31 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise I think it'd stand a very good shot at WP:GAN. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:47, 31 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]