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Requested move 16 October 2024

It has been proposed in this section that Second battle of Jabalia be renamed and moved to Third Battle of Jabalia.

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Second battle of Jabalia → Third Battle of Jabalia – It is a battle after the Second Battle of Jabalia, which has no article in the language yet. אורי9 (talk) 07:16, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 October 2024

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What I think should be changed:

The page name should be change to "Third Battle of Jabalia".

Why it should be changed:

The Second Battle of Jabalia was in May, it just don't have a wiki page. I'm not an "extended-protected" user so I can't create the article myself, but I don't mind helping.

References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

Few reference to the May battle in Jabalia: BBC, reuters, The Guardian.

Comment:

This artice isn't currently "extended-confirmed-protected", probably should be changed to one. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 13:37, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. M.Bitton (talk) 14:07, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@M.Bitton

I will be more precise.

I'm requesting to change the page name:

.

This is actually the third battle to take place in Jabalia. I am currently working on creating a page for the May battle in Jabalia (I have discussed the proposed new article on the talk pages of User talk:Yovt and Talk:Battle of Jabalia).

As a reference supporting my proposed change, I am citing the following from BBC:

"This is the third time Israeli forces have gone into Jabalia and its refugee camp over the past year".

Additionally, this page is still not Extended-confirmed protected, and I would appreciate it if you (or someone else) could "protect" it. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 07:51, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: page moves are not edit requests. Someone else also suggested another title that they will discuss with other extended-confirmed editors. M.Bitton (talk) 12:00, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, thank you anyway. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 12:47, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 October 2024 - update casualties

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What I think should be changed (format using {{textdiff}}):

Change Israeli casualties to:
Per Israel:
1 soldier killed

Change Palestinian Joint Operations Room casualties to:
Per Israel:
Dozens of militants killed

Why it should be changed:

Just an update to more recent claims.

References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

reuters for "one soldier killed", The Hindu for "Dozens of militants killed".

Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 13:59, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

Move

Should this article be moved to “siege of Jabalia camp”? The fighting seems to be going on around there, though it could spillover to Jabalia itself The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 14:37, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

When does it say 12 vehicles are destroyed?

It doesnt say that 68.174.61.132 (talk) 02:56, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]